Thursday, October 4, 2007

5. First draft

Mun, Sukho
IEL074
Assignment 1

The reason I came to Moraine Valley

Hello. My name is Mun, Sukho. I came to Chicago about 2 weeks ago and have a relative who lives at Alsip. The relative is my father’s younger sister. She lives with her husband, mother, and daughter who ocassionally return home from a University. I’m going to stay in her house for one year.

There are three reasons to choose Moraine Valley Community College. The first thing was the quality of education as the one of the most important factors. The second consideration was classes that are related to my major. Finally I considered location[M1] .

I first heard about Moraine Valley Communit College from my relative younger sister. She told me that Moraine Valley Community College is school for their local citizen and also has known as [M2] a school providing high quality education.

My major was computer science in Korea so my goal is to become one of the best professional Networkers that manipulates[M3] communication devices.Before I came here, I had seached a University that has network programs. As a result, I found that Moraine Valley Community College is close to my house in USA and has many proper programs for me.This is why that I chose Moraine Valley Community College.

[M1]How do I express order of the time.

[M2]Is this idiomatic right?

[M3]When I do this cituation, Can I use the the plural?

4. advice to a student

Actually, giving advice to someone is diffcult thing. It is why everyone can decide his life by oneself. But If I can give advice, I will recommend going to school. If somebody is student now, I think it's time to attend school.everybody will be able to get a job whenever he want. But study is not. If someone miss time to study, he certainly will have hard time. I think learning something is important things in his life. If you are a student and hesitating whetherto go to school or to get a job, you must decide to go to school quickly without hesitation. You have to keep in mind that it is easy to studywhen you are a student.

3. Preparation better for the next test

There are many ways to improve my next test. First, I will have to memorize many vocabularies because without many vocabularies I can't do anything. The Second thing is to know aritcle of grammar. The Third thing is to practice many times in writting something because pracitce is the best way to improve english skill. Forth, I also need to read many books or newspaper and to study punction in grammar. Finally, before finishing to write some article, I will need to review repeatedly.

2. Summary

It was trouble while I did homework.
First, I had a lot of problem in grammer because I don't know where I can write article in grammar. Second, I used Korea Edition Microsoft Office so it was expressed by Korean language in comment. Third, There are many problems by writting function. Fourth, I needed various vocabulary to exactly express many things. Finally, I realize that I have to learn structure of article.

Thursday, September 13, 2007

1. Why I came to Moraine Valley

Mun, Sukho
IEL074
Assignment 1

Why I came to Moraine Valley

Hello, my name is Mun Sukho. I came to Chicago about 2 weeks ago and have a relative who lives in Alsip. The relative is my father’s younger sister. She lives with her husband, mother, and daughter who ocassionally returns home from a University. I’m going to stay in her house for one year.

There are three reasons I chose Moraine Valley Community College. The First factor was the quality of education. The second consideration was classes that are relative to my major. Finally, I considered location.[문석호1]

I first heard about Moraine Valley Community College from my relative’s younger sister. She told me that Moraine Valley Community College is school for their local citizens and is also known as [문석호2] a school providing high quality education.

My major was computer science in Korea, so my goal is to become one of the best professional Networkers to manipulate[문석호3] communication devices.Before I came here, I had searched for a University that has network programs. Instead, I found that Moraine Valley Community College is close to my house in the USA and has many proper programs for me.This is why I chose Moraine Valley Community College.

[문석호1]How do I express order of the time

[문석호2]Is this idiomatic right?

[문석호3]When I do this cituation, Can I use the plural?